[ SECRET POST #2202 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2202 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Sorry, early today!

Also: I'm not going to officially warn for tongue-in-cheek "triggers" just to provide anyone with a fandom-specific in-joke when there are none in the secret.

Secrets Left to Post: 06 pages, 140 secrets from Secret Submission Post #315.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

That's not a complete sentence, and it's bothering the hell out of me. Doesn't have him as some kind of sexually fucked up what?

[(Anonymous)]

being, probably.

[(Anonymous)]

it seems pretty complete to me?? like they were saying "some kind of sexually fucked up" in the same way you'd say "gay" or "straight".

[(Anonymous)]

"some kind of sexually fucked up" doesn't really make sense though. It seems like it should read either "some kind of sexual fuck up" or "kind of sexually fucked up". But you can gather the meaning either way so whatever.

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AYRT

I have no idea how you'd say "some kind of sexually fucked up" in the same way as you'd say "gay" or "straight". It doesn't work grammatically.

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DA

I read it as equivalent to, "sexually fucked up in some kind of way."

It works if you take out some of the modifiers. Would the sentence work if the OP had just said, "...that doesn't have Shepperd as fucked up"? (Admittedly I'd've gone with "portray him as," but that's me.) If so, then you can just add back in the "sexually" and "some kind of."

[(Anonymous)]

The modifiers are the problem, so the fact that the sentence works without them doesn't mean anything.
"being some kind of fucked up sexually" of even "sexually fucked up in some way" would be better.

[(Anonymous)]

Would "some flavor of sexually fucked up" have worked better?

[(Anonymous)]

I'd have put sexually after the fucked up, not before.

[(Anonymous)]

instead of the 'gay or straight' comparison, i read 'some kind of sexually fucked up' in the same way you might say 'some kind of crazy' - so, colloquial short hand for 'some kind of kind/type/flavour of _______.' (in this case sexually fucked up). so, reads fine to me.

[(Anonymous)]

I would always have put it "fucked up sexually" never "sexually fucked up"

DA

[anonymouslyyours]

I'm on the complete opposite side here. "Sexually fucked up" makes me feel like someone fucked him up, in a sexual way -- not a more generic "he has issues". "Fucked up" is a colloquial term and "sexually" was just a qualifier?