[ SECRET POST #2236 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2236 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

01.
[Inda series]


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02.
[Les Miserables and Discworld]

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03.
[Three Kingdoms 2010, Legend of Chu and Han]


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05.
[DBSK]


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06.
[The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion (Shivering Isles)]


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08.


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09. [SPOILERS for ]

[Umineko no Naku Koro Ni]


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10. [SPOILERS for Supernatural]



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11. [WARNING for rape]



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12. [possible warning for sexual assault (as I'm sure the thread will contain discussion of it)]



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13. [WARNING for abuse]



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14. [WARNING for rape, abuse, etc]



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15. [WARNING for suicide]



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16. [WARNING for eating disorders]



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17. [WARNING for rape/non-con]

[Homestuck]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 00 pages, 000 secrets from Secret Submission Post #319.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I feel like finding the second example "bad" hinges on a pessimistic outlook on readers. It's not like most people don't register words quickly (those old enough to be reading smut). A line like that is barely going to "slow" me down, it just makes me go "oh, they're using a condom" and I'm right back in the action.

It reminds me in a distant way of how novice writers will try so hard to vary "he said" "she said" dialogue tags to the point of absurdity, afraid of repetition and not realizing that the tag is virtually invisible to readers; people don't pay any mind to it unless it's made a big deal of or used incorrectly. Unless the condom use is drawn out, a reader's going to have passed over it and continued in two seconds.