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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2013-03-04 07:01 pm

[ SECRET POST #2253 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2253 ⌋

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[personal profile] greenvelvetcake 2013-03-05 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
I was interested in this one fantasy book until someone told me the prose was awful. When two characters were making out, it included the sentences "Our tongues writhed, and slithered in their caves of pleasure. Tongues proclaiming what we were. Human. Lovers."

It's just a really unappealing mental image.

(Anonymous) 2013-03-05 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
and slithered in their caves of pleasure

O_o

The rest of the phrase is passable, but that bit? That bit bothers me. *shudders*

(Anonymous) 2013-03-05 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Giant mutant space slugs, having their way with one another in specially designated pleasure chambers that are filled with soft soil, bits of discarded shell, various sexual instruments, and a human in a cage.
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[personal profile] greenvelvetcake 2013-03-05 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
D8