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case) wrote in
fandomsecrets2013-05-24 06:44 pm
[ SECRET POST #2334 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2334 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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[Jesus Christ Superstar]
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[Torvill and Dean]
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[Conan O'Brien]
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11. http://i.imgur.com/eBIFfE1.jpg
[linked for gore, video game]
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12. [SPOILERS for Resident Evil, Gears of War, Red Dead Redemption, The Walking Dead and Jonah Hex]

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13. [SPOILERS for Iron Man 3]

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14. [WARNING for suicide]

[Hetalia]
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I am also, sigh, a comma abuser. As soon as I figured out where commas actually went in a sentence, I went to town. I also (unsurprisingly) have a loving relationship with Mr. Oxford Comma.
I try to reread but I rarely write chaptered anythings (because I'm so bad) and I get more discouraged the more I read my own stuff. I think about how much MORE I have to write, and eventually I decide I don't care anymore because I've already written the story in my head--why would I need to finish it on paper?
I proofread a lot for phrases like, "a little." I have caught myself using it two or three times in one sentence! Ouch! (Mostly in RP but when I edit those to turn them into fanfiction, it's so obvious that it burns.)
Also, I sympathize on the sentence thing, too, because I'm the same way. I will reread stuff I've written and say, "Wait, that doesn't even make sense. What was I even doing when I wrote this, because...it was like I changed thoughts right in the middle of a sentence."
Or worse, switched words, phrases, typed whole phrases in reverse order of the way they're actually said, et cetera. It's like my mind just thinks, "Once upon a time..." but my hands are too stupid to START with "Once"--they jump to "time." And then my brain is like, "BITCH YOU FORGOT THE REST OF THAT," and my hands are like, "OH OKAY LET'S ADD THEM ON THE END, IT'S THE SAME THING RIGHT?!"
And for some reason I don't notice this until I proofread.
My last chaptered 'fic I had a character answer a question with "Yes," instead of "No" and that threw...everything off. A friend reviewed and was like, "Uh, you meant...no, right? Or this doesn't make sense."