[ SECRET POST #2393 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2393 ⌋

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Comments

Re: A little writing question

[(Anonymous)]

For me, it would depend on how the story is formatted. If the characters each have their own chapters or sections of chapters that are just their own POV, either in first person or third limited, using the appropriate spelling would help me get into their view. If the whole story is third person limited to the two of them, or the POV switches off between sentences or even paragraphs, it would strike me as very messy and jarring.

Re: A little writing question

[(Anonymous)]

I agree. If you're writing from a particular character's POV, I'd personally find it distracting to have an American character think "flat" or a British character think "apartment" (and they certainly should speak using the right terms) but if you jump around a lot with the POV, stick to one version of the language for non-dialogue portions.