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⌈ Secret Post #2393 ⌋

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Re: A little writing question

[ariakas]

If it's close third person perspective - i.e., we're hearing their intimate thoughts - then I'd say definitely change the vocabulary and the syntax. Spelling isn't isn't necessary, but you could try that. It would work especially well if they each have their own separate chapters.

If you're doing a more omniscient or distant third person narrative, though, it could get distracting. That said, reading an "American" character who thinks in English syntax about "lorries" would be just about the worst thing ever.