[ SECRET POST #2435 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2435 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 049 secrets from Secret Submission Post #348.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[mekkio]

Truth be told, pacing is hard. And I have yet to find a book on how to do it. Let alone do it for comics. I do a webcomic and I am always wondering if my pacing is off. Because I have X amount of story line and details within the story line but I don't want to it spread through so many pages. But still, sometimes it happens because leaving out a detail will through the whole story off. It's frustrating, to say the least.

All you can do is read other people's comics and learn from them. See what works and what doesn't work.

[insanenoodlyguy]

Link us to your webcomic! We need to judge you!

[mekkio]

But-
I mean -
Wait -
Aw, screw it.
Judge away.

[(Anonymous)]

I'm no expert on pacing either, but your comic is hilarious and entertaining.

[mekkio]

Thank you! I know humor is subjective and mine can be a bit twisted and weird sometimes, so it's always nice to meet someone who has the same humor as me.

[(Anonymous)]

It's pretty good! There are some panels where the characters look a bit too stiff, but holy shit your anatomy is cool, you don't cheat by making the characters barely move, your paneling is pretty decent, the writing is funny

I just hope you don't stagnate and stop improving

[mekkio]

Thank you. And I hope I don't stop improving either. I know that Purson looks different now from when I started him. I didn't even realize it but he went from having large, thin horns to small chubby ones. (They kind of look like bent carrots stuck to the side of his head, don't they?) As far as running out of story, I just started chapter two and I have at least up to chapter four written. So, it's going to be a while before I am without a plot.

[(Anonymous)]

Does it take place in the future?

[mekkio]

No, it takes place in present time. It's a fantasy comic. Think Supernatural, meets Being Human meets Chasing the Moon with a sprinkle of Gaiman. Basically, the story is about a woman named Agnes who wakes up with a Demon in her bed, a Ghost in her hallway and an Angel on her lawn and with no memory of the previous night that led to this.

[(Anonymous)]

Okay. Uh...the reason I asked is because you have the ghost say that he died in 1886, and then the demon says "so you've been thinking of that speech for 200 plus years?"

I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, I just wanted to point it out.

[mekkio]

1) You are not being a dick. If I made a mistake, I made a mistake. And I made a mistake. Thank you for pointing it out so I can fix it. Hate for anyone else to be confused. 2) You are the first person to point that out and it has been up for months. Which makes me wonder if anyone else notice it and thought, "Yeah, I am not going to point it out." Or everyone just looked at that gigantic speech bubble and thought, "tl;dr."

Again, thank you for pointing it out. I am my own only editor. And extra pair of eyes is always grateful for stuff I miss.

[(Anonymous)]

Oooh, this is fun! :)

[mekkio]

Aww, thank you. And thanks for reading!