[ SECRET POST #2437 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2437 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 024 secrets from Secret Submission Post #348.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 1 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
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Comments

Re: Inspired by #10

[(Anonymous)]

I don't know what is an 'unobtrusive' epithet for you, but for me any variation of 'the other man' in limited third when the characters know each other and wouldn't think of each other like that is instant backbutton, because it's practically always indicative of other writing problems. The few times I've overlooked this because something about the fic caught my interest, I've always ended up regretting having wasted my time on it. Occasionally slightly ambiguous language is much easier to overlook when the writing is decent otherwise.