[ SECRET POST #2477 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2477 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Poll

[siofrabunnies]

A lot of these seem more like 'flavour' for a character. Either make them big enough to affect the plot or her dialogue, or mention them only in passing (" Ugh, my braces keep getting food stuck in them! Now, can you help me with my application essay?").

I'd say to drop half of those traits, whichever are the less important. Then decide the the trait is for plot or character. Plot traits are made big; character traits are just brought up sometimes.

Even in real life, she sounds too busy. Very, very few people can pull off this much activity (plus ADD!) without burnout. If this girl is the main character, she'd end up pretty Sue-ish.