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fandomsecrets2013-10-14 06:42 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2013-10-14 06:42 pm
[ SECRET POST #2477 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2477 ⌋
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Re: Poll
(Anonymous) 2013-10-15 05:02 am (UTC)(link)Either drop the ADD or do actual research on it, so that you can present accurately instead of using it in a way that comes off very much as you [general]going "Magic!" and completely ignoring what the actual thing is like.
I'd also say that, the ADD badness aside, the character just doesn't have a whole lot that would lend itself to conflict, based on what you've shown us. It's possible she *could*, depending on how she was handled...but based on this? I'm not sure that would happen, particularly since conflict [or at least good conflict] generally comes from a character having to confront/deal with their flaws...and this character just doesn't seem to have any. The few that are, are really shallow - to the point of it literally being her appearance in one case - and those being minor.
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Re: Poll
(Anonymous) 2013-10-15 05:03 am (UTC)(link)tl;dr: This character *might* be workable, but you really need to develop their flaws and either drop the ADD or do a lot of research on it.