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fandomsecrets2014-01-12 03:39 pm
[ SECRET POST #2567 ]
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Re: Small things in fic that drive you insane
Yes. That is exactly what I said. /s
You do realise there are ways to explain concepts in a story without an infodump, right? Basic storytelling 101? The colourguard are just the flag-bearers in the school band, so maybe they could describe it just like that, in simple terms that anyone outside the US could understand? Crazy, I know.
Speaking of which, I don't see how 'write your fic so that non-Americans can still understand concepts' somehow equals 'write for my culture only'.
It would maybe kill you to do a quick google search?
Nope. But guess what? Having to do that google search takes me straight out of the story and ruins the narrative. That is also storytelling 101.
Re: Small things in fic that drive you insane
So that is also one way of doing it, it was also slightly explained during the chapters, but not too much as both characters knew the traditions (for the most part themselves).
Re: Small things in fic that drive you insane
Re: Small things in fic that drive you insane
(Anonymous) 2014-01-13 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)And let me guess, you're one of those Brits who pisses and moans about how substituting "lemon drop" and "sweater" for "sherbet lemon" and "jumper," for the benefit of American readers, is "dumbing down" the narrative.
Re: Small things in fic that drive you insane
(Anonymous) 2014-01-13 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)