[ SECRET POST #2825 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2825 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 065 secrets from Secret Submission Post #404.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I feel your pain, OP. A good beta is priceless, and they're hard to find. I guess you could try asking more focused questions to your current betas to see if any of them have that potential, like "What do you think of the characterization in this scene, does it fit with what you know of [character name]?" or "This is the point I'm trying to get across: [explanation], do you think I've done that effectively for a reader who doesn't know the backstory?"

Good luck.