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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-05-10 06:22 pm

[ SECRET POST #3415 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3415 ⌋

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[personal profile] ketita 2016-05-11 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
Ha. I would have been happy with ratcheting the angst up in the middle third, and then kind of slowing it down in preparation for the end. I liked the climax, and I liked how the evil plot did end up working, and Tony couldn't even see it.
For me, the only truly 유A유 moment was when Zemo started reprogramming Bucky, and Bucky was struggling to get out. Other than that, I didn't find anything super angsty.
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[personal profile] ariakas 2016-05-11 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
the only truly 유A유 moment was when Zemo started reprogramming Bucky

I loved this moment too. It was really well-acted and I can't imagine how horrific that would be -_-
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[personal profile] ketita 2016-05-11 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
I was like yesssssssss this is what I'm here for. I could've used a few more moments like that.
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[personal profile] ariakas 2016-05-11 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Bucky's story is just so fucking awful, man. If anything they downplay it, severely. He's basically been tortured since the Second World War and not just physically, but with the loss of control and the loss of memory I kind of wonder what he lives for now. I think he needs more screen time, and Cap and Tony need less.

Like I said to kaijinscendre above I guess my desire for narrative fulfilment in terms of the death thing could just as easily been satisfied with one of them believing one of them had been killed, rather than it actually having happened. You have to admit that would have been damned intense (and not overly grimdark).