[ SECRET POST #5853 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5853 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I don't think I've seen anyone dragging it? I don't do Tiktok and booktube ignores it?

I mean, you aren't wrong on the social media thing. The "website excerpts" were a poor framing device. The college girl protag did college girl protag things with over the top consequences. So it fell more YA than adult, which if it had been written YA fine, but it wasn't. The relationship between the girl and the alien felt romantic b/c there was no other good platonic relationship to compare it too. (I don't think it was supposed to be romantic.) And the whole "I took a few classes on linguistics, let's use linguistics as the 'science.'" felt shoehorned in to make the book more "hard/serious SF."

I guess TL;DR, it didn't know what type of book it wanted to be other than... contrived? I can see why it took so long to get a contract and probably her social media status had something to do with it.

Did I drag it enough for you OP?

[(Anonymous)]

i think it was supposed to be romantic, or that’s where it’s headed at least

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ayrt

I think romantic is where it is headed as well.

Okay, don't get me wrong, the prose was fine. Like, it just felt very strange to have all these different things and "alien romance" with it? That made it confusing in... a genre expectations kind of way. I wouldn't know how to 'sell' it to a reader and would always have to ask "do you like alien romance?" That's just me, I guess. Over analyzing.

[(Anonymous)]

The prose isn't even "fine," though, it's pretty clunky and tedious in a lot of places. Like, embarrassingly so.

It did seem to be heading to romance, I agree, but then I think I've heard that there's a human love interest in the sequel so who knows.

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(ayrt)

I have read a lot worse. So when I say fine, it's "It didn't make me bash my head against a wall."

But yes it was very tedious in some places.

Interesting about the human love interest. I wasn't going to read the sequel, so I'll have to find a summary somewhere. She's contracted for 3 books I think.

OP here

[(Anonymous)]

Haha, thanks nonny. "Contrived" is right, but that's what happens when you file the serial numbers off your Transformers fanfic.

I don't do TikTok and I barely do BookTube, but one of the two or three booktubers I follow genuinely and unironically loved this book and I was utterly baffled. I think it was only because he's a huge Lindsay Ellis fan and because he doesn't normally read sci fi.

Re: OP here

[(Anonymous)]

(ayrt)

Transformers fanfic? Really?

OMG. That makes SO MUCH SENSE. The whole stroking her head thing.

I mean if you don't normally read SciFi, then maybe yeah, you'd like it. But err... (eyes piles of scifi has read) yeah.