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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2024-02-19 04:07 am

[ SECRET POST #6253 ]


⌈ Secret Post #6253 ⌋

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Re: Secrets you don't want to make...

(Anonymous) 2024-02-19 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
OKAY
is the one word that throws me straight out of any novel/fic with a historical/fantasy setting and at worst makes me backbutton instantly.
It's just so jarring and out of place and could easily be replaced with something else (like alright or similar).
I know it's a weird hill to die on but it is what it is.

Re: Secrets you don't want to make...

(Anonymous) 2024-02-19 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
See, "alright" would throw me out of a story because my brain refuses to process it as one word.

Re: Secrets you don't want to make...

(Anonymous) 2024-02-19 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
All right or other options are available.