[ SECRET POST #1898 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #1898 ⌋


Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Comments

[mika-kun.livejournal.com]

I actually cut her a lot of slack about that line because Krik was being too pushy. She clearly didn't want to talk to him and she started off firm, but not vicious, but then he kept talking to her. So for her to escalate to get him to stop bothering her is totally fine with me. The audience knows that Krik's an overall good guy, but she doesn't. He's just some guy at a bar and for all she knows he's a violent creep. Given her age it makes even more sense, she hasn't had the opportunity to learn poise in stressful situations.

I just didn't like the "dumb hick" bit because it carries the sentiment "people who live in the country are lesser than city people". I grew up in a big city but that still makes me recoil.