[ SECRET POST #2008 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2008 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 04 pages, 088 secrets from Secret Submission Post #287.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 1 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 2 - posted twice ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[altuscor.livejournal.com]

I agree that the writing and the artwork could use a little more improvement. There's something about the faces that bother me. The anatomy isn't too bad, although the exaggerated muscles throw me off every now and then. It's early yet, but the scene does drag. But I don't think it's horrible. I've seen a hell of a lot worse. My main issue is the possible age difference between the two characters which I can overlook, but it'll always be niggling me at the back of my mind.

But I disagree with the whole 'begging for money' issue. While I do get second hand embarrassment for that goal of $400, it's not like the site will shut itself down if it's never going to be met. The guy still updates consistently every week. I really don't know what that money would be used for, but you never know. It could be used to make the printed material, and I'm not sure how it is in the States, but that doesn't cheap here I'm from.