[ SECRET POST #2223 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2223 ⌋

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Comments

[making_excuses]

I didn't word myself that well, and I was thinking about this book I was reading last month and somehow my thought got slightly mixed and fanfiction happened... I dunno?

[(Anonymous)]

No worries, I find it really confusing myself. I think you've also jumped between past and present tense in your story, and the difference between those is a whole other level of confusing that people get just as wanky passionate about.
The wikipedia article on this is pretty good, if you're curious! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Narrative_mode#Third-person_voices