[ SECRET POST #2223 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2223 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I think I might be misunderstanding this. Are you saying you don't think it's possible to have a story that has a strictly limited POV? I actually think that's the norm, particularly in mystery or romantic stories where having perfect knowledge of every character would ruin the suspense. Most stories are written in past tense, 3rd person subjective POV IIRC from high school english.

[making_excuses]

I didn't word myself that well, and I was thinking about this book I was reading last month and somehow my thought got slightly mixed and fanfiction happened... I dunno?

[(Anonymous)]

No worries, I find it really confusing myself. I think you've also jumped between past and present tense in your story, and the difference between those is a whole other level of confusing that people get just as wanky passionate about.
The wikipedia article on this is pretty good, if you're curious! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Narrative_mode#Third-person_voices