[ SECRET POST #2636 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2636 ⌋

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I really liked the concept and the worldbuilding, and a lot of the bits and pieces were fun, but I wasn't really excited by any of the characters, with the possible exception of Lobsang. They were just kind of meh.

It kind of felt like a universe in search of a plot. It brainstormed a bunch of potential plots, dabbled in a scattering of them, but never really committed to any of them. And the ending felt... gratuitous? Forced? Tacked on to show that this one plot we messed with a bit really was a big plot, see how important it is?

I've had the sequel for months and haven't read it yet (except the end).

[(Anonymous)]

Lobsang. As in... Lobsang Ludd, the main character from "Thief of Time"? ...I need to read this. Now.

[(Anonymous)]

No, no, that's what I thought too, and got all excited, but it is, in fact, a different Lobsang.