[ SECRET POST #2641 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2641 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 018 secrets from Secret Submission Post #377.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 1 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

I don't have one in the works right now so I'll just use my two posted ones.

Well, this one is obvious:

Klavier Gavin had always assumed it was luck, maybe a quirk of personality, his style of cross-examination, possibly a greater sense of intuitiveness.

This one I like more as an opening:

It started in Nepal.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[herpymcderp]

I like the first one better as the start of a fic, but the second one could be the start of a novel.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

Really? How so? I'm curious.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[herpymcderp]

The first one is direct and to the point, which I feel is good for a shorter work when you're going for something more succinct.

The second carries a weight to it and a kind of portent that allows a reader to get invested, but gives you a lot of space with how much you want to reveal right away, which I feel works well for novels. It also immediately provokes questions, most obviously: "What happened in Nepal?", but also "Why is Nepal important?", "Who was in Nepal?", and (possibly for some people) "Where the hell is Nepal?"

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

Hmm, you actually hit upon why I used those lines. I like you. Yeah, the first I needed to get the point quickly whereas the second I had to draw shit out.

Unfortunately, due to just how things went down the first ended up longer. Oh well.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[herpymcderp]

If there's something I've noticed it's that writers (decent ones anyway) tend to think the same way about writing. ;)

Re: post the first line of your fics

[(Anonymous)]

Link for the second one pls?

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

It's Avengers fic. Please heed the warnings. I don't want to upset anyone.

Attempts in Life for Death

Hope you like it.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[(Anonymous)]

ayrt

Yes, it was good, thanks!

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

Oh yay! I'm so happy. Thank you for reading.

Re: post the first line of your fics

[diet_poison]

Yay, Bruce fic! Thanks for the read!

Re: post the first line of your fics

[forgottenjester]

Thank you for reading. :3