[ SECRET POST #5321 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #5321 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 02 pages, 33 secrets from Secret Submission Post #762.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I'm not even a good writer by any measure and struggle to write a multi-chapter story, so congrats to anyone who completes a book. I also don't expect anyone's first novel-length story to be that great, but hopefully if they're going to keep on improving as a writer in the long run, it wouldn't really matter that much.

That said, the other parts in the secret about religious zealotry and bland writing is a doozy. Maybe you can gloss over reading it? Maybe suddenly admit that you have a hard time reading long-form stuff lately due to the pandemic changing things up a lot? I'm not sure how hurt your friend might be if you can't read their story, but even a little low-effort-glossing has gone well in my case when I'm offered stories to read (I honestly struggle to read stories now days, sorry).